Back to Work

Now I'll get back to work on preparing my book to be published. I was concerned about why some of the chapters seemed to move slowly while others were snappier. I thought it might be a difficult problem to solve. But one of the people in my writers group, Sue Mazzone (www.moodmovie.blogspot.com) found the main problem. She asked me to count the words in the opening sentence of one chapter. There were 37 words in that sentence! I will be reviewing all the chapters for run-on sentences and posting them to this blog, then updating the website when they are all complete. If you have any questions, please let me know!